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Would expect also explanations in next of examples. Currently there is quite hard to understand the meaning of used parameters. Also connection with sysadmin everyday's work would be expected with relevant examples, e.g. filtering log files and count certain IP-address presence etc. When there are written several parameters then it would be also interesting to know how to use them in sysadmin point of view. When article itself is in English then review would be also expected in same language to ensure that author can understand it properly. Review was started as new wiki article but supposed to be in discussion tab, made a redirection and copied review to | Would expect also explanations in next of examples. Currently there is quite hard to understand the meaning of used parameters. Also connection with sysadmin everyday's work would be expected with relevant examples, e.g. filtering log files and count certain IP-address presence etc. When there are written several parameters then it would be also interesting to know how to use them in sysadmin point of view. When the article itself is in English then review would be also expected in same language to ensure that author can understand it properly. Review was started as new wiki article but supposed to be in discussion tab, made a redirection and copied review to here. | ||
Latest revision as of 14:16, 19 December 2016
Retsensioon
Author: Aleksandr Laada A21
Hinnang oli tehtud 07.12.2016 kell 4.00
| KRITEERIUM | KAAL | HINNANG | SELGITUS | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Skoop | 0,5 | 0.4 | Selle Unix Utility kohta palju õelda ei saa. | |
| Artikli tutvustus ja versioon | 0,5 | 0,5 | Kogu töö on tehtud inglise keeles, aga on kasutanud hea kirjandus. | |
| Sissejuhatus | 0,5 | 0,5 | Sissejuhatuses on õeldnud, mille jaoks me kasutame seda utilidi ja milline võib olla vasus | |
| Tehniliselt korrektne | 1 | 1 | Käsku syntax's on korrektne, ka on olemas võimalikud operandid ja nende selgitused | |
| Kasutatud kirjandus | 0,5 | 0,5 | Mina ei ledsin mingi muud informatsiooni, aga oli kasutanud Man leht | |
| Näited kasutamiseks/käsud | 1 | 0,8 | Tehniliselt kõik mis toodud Näite artiklis hästi töötab, aga seda ei ole kõik võimalused kuidas võib Uniq töötada. On võimalik midagi veel panna. | |
| Sisu | 4 | 3 | Sisuga kõik korras aga on võimalik lisada, et kuskilt aluses panna mingi sõnum, et selline käsk mitte parim käsk, ja paremini kasutada teist käsud. Versionil 5,97 oli viga, et kirillitsa tähtega oli suur probleemid, aga pärast v 6,4 rohkem probleeemi sellega ei olnud | |
| Ülesehitus | 1 | 1 | Artikli ehitus on ilus ja loogiline | |
| Kirjavead ja õigekiri | 1 | 1 | Grammatikad mina ei saa hinnata, et minu grammatika inglise keeles ja eesti keeles on nõrk tasemel. | - |
| Kokku | 10 | 8,7 | Töö põhimõteliselt tehtud hästi, on olemas väike nüansid aga seda ei muutub kogu pilt. Mis on Uniq käsk ja kuidas seda kasutada. |
Lecturer's comment
Would expect also explanations in next of examples. Currently there is quite hard to understand the meaning of used parameters. Also connection with sysadmin everyday's work would be expected with relevant examples, e.g. filtering log files and count certain IP-address presence etc. When there are written several parameters then it would be also interesting to know how to use them in sysadmin point of view. When the article itself is in English then review would be also expected in same language to ensure that author can understand it properly. Review was started as new wiki article but supposed to be in discussion tab, made a redirection and copied review to here.
